Our draft for the opening scene of our movie

FILM NAME: Retribution

Draft of our opening scene: 
*He is waiting in the doctors surgery for his HIV results*
*Looks at a HIV poster on the wall*
*Begins to hear a serman given from a pastor about homosexuality*
*Flashes back to him in the church*
Pastor reads out this sermon: 
Leviticus 20:13 
Punishments for Sexual Immorality: If there is a man who lies with his daughter-in-law, both of them shall surely be put to death; they have committed incest, their bloodguiltiness is upon them. If there is a man who lies with a male as those who lie with a woman, both of them have committed a detestable act; they shall surely be put to death. Their bloodguiltiness is upon them. If there is a man who marries a woman and her mother, it is immorality; both he and they shall be burned with fire, so that there will be no immorality in your midst.…
 *Flashes back to him and his boyfriend*:
-Walking through a park

-Laughing with each other at someone’s house

-Eating at a restaurant/café
*Returns to present day*
Doctor: Henry Fitzgerald to room 1 please

*Henry walks into doctor’s room and sits down*

Doctor: it’s just in here

*Opens door for him he walks in *

Doctor: Hello, I’m Doctor Henderson and I’ll be giving you your results today

*Shakes hand and Henry sits down*

*Doctor hands him letter*

*Henry opens letter*

*Doctors voice in the background*

Doctor: Do you have any questions? 

*Camera goes to a close up shot of Henrys face looking sad*